Samples of some good LinkedIn/email copy below, happy hunting!

Also, please review the subject lines course for sending emails and inMails. Subject lines, are VERY important when sending messages.

​Sample LinkedIn Invite copy:

Joe,We specialize in Media Sales recruitment.Would you have interest in a Regional Sales Manager role Dallas terr. w/ 20-year-old growing Company?Strong base/comm. plan, exclusive territory and captive audienceIf it's not a good time, no worries, let's connect for the future

Joe,

We are seeking a Program Manager for a leading Manufacturing Company, remote role w/ travel to Corp. they are growing and have a high tenured staff.

Would you have any interest in learning more?

If it's not the right time, no worries, let's connect either way!

Joe,

Impressive background, it seems we are both in the (Industry name) industry, it would be great to connect with you on LinkedIn.

Joe,

I’m a recruiter in the (Industry name) space. You’re probably not looking now but my network may be valuable to you in the future. Let’s connect now, I may become valuable to you in the future.

Joe,

We specialize in the CPG category and are retained by companies throughout the country.

Also, we are seeking a Supply Chain Analyst leading Consumer Packaged Goods Co. in Stamford - any interest?

Let's connect either way!

Joe,

We are retained by a global Safety Products Company that's seeking an Engineer with your experience.

Your background looks like a great match. They are motivated and will offer an aggressive salary for the right person.

Would you have any interest in learning about this role in detail? Let's connect either way!

Sample LinkedIn copy after the connection, also good for emailing:

Joe,

Impressive background Joe. We are seeking a (Title) for a leading Manufacturing Company(Industry), (Add in company and job details that sell) remote role w/ travel to Corp. they are growing and have a high tenured staff.

Would you have any interest in learning more?

If it's not the right time, no worries, would you know anyone for this type of role?

Joe,

Great to connect with you today Joe. We are retained by a (Sell the company) global optical manufacturing company, in business since 1952. They are seeking someone with strong optical experience, your background seems to be an excellent match. They are willing to offer an attractive salary to the right person. Would you be available for a quick call to discuss the role together? If know you’re busy so I will get to the point on the call.

Let me know, as I mentioned they are motivated to hire, and are willing to put an attractive compensation package together.

Joe,

Impressive background, we are retained by a leading optical metrology instruments Manufacturing Company seeking someone with your background to fill a Program Manager position is in the Meridian, CT area. They are a leading and fast-growing global company with huge career progression opportunities. They are offering an aggressive salary plus bonus for the right candidate. I’m confident we can get you an attractive offer to make a move. Would you or anyone you know be interested in discussing this role in full detail? I will give full disclosure once we talk. Let me know if you have any interest either way - Thanks a lot!

Joe,

We have an opening for a Sales Executive with a growing 20-year-old Cutting Edge Digital Communications Company. They are seeking someone to exclusively cover the Dallas area working from a home office! Successful Reps are making from 100-200K+. Top Rep. made 300K last year!

Joe,

Impressive background, we are retained by a leading Market Research Company seeking someone with your background to fill a Sales Director position, this is a remote work from home role. They are a leading and fast-growing global company with huge career progression opportunities.

They are offering an aggressive salary plus high commissions. They are motived to hire, I’m confident we can get you an attractive offer to make a move.

Would you or anyone you know be interested in discussing this role in full detail? I will give full disclosure once we talk.

Let me know if you have any interest either way - Thanks a lot!